Rachel’s First Story

One day, Zach, Mae, Rachel and Jack went to the beach because it was sunny.
They played beach ball, built a sandcastle and swimmed.(swum!)
The ball went into the sea. Rachel could not reach it, or (nor) could Mae or Jack. No one could, but a fisherman caught it and he gave it back.
Then they went back home for dinner and then they went to bed.
The end.

By Rachel age 6 1/2.

Not a bad start I reckon!